WALT:paint an image in the readers mind.
1. The ocean is shiny because the sun is rising up by the pasifika ocean. The beautiful ocean sparkly with an ombre colour, going as a light blue into a dark shiny blue. With some clam waves. You can see some big waves coming towards the shallow end, then turning into little clam waves. 2. The sand is a shiny golden color. With some nice calm wave’s coming up on the sand. The sand is so soft you can build heaps of sandcastle, with a dash of pretty shells. The sand is so sparkly you can nearly fall asleep. 3. Looking up at the shiny royale blue sky, with heaps of clouds. The sun shiny on to the ocean, with a dash of glassing. The sky is clam with some clouds mixed in the middle. 4. Looking in the sea seeing fish, and kids making sandcastle, with water buckets and in the buckets there is water. Swimming in the cold clam sea is making me tired because of how cool, and claim it is.