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Showing posts with label Writing2018. Show all posts

Wednesday, 21 November 2018

Promotion Videos



This week we did a Pt England school movie, it was really fun to do and was a bit funny.
Hope you enjoy my movie.


Thursday, 15 November 2018

Writing Doc: Keyhole Narrative



Once a upon a time, there was a family fill of girls and their names were Mele, Jane,Nina and Mia. Mia was the baby, Mele was the nana, Jane was the mum to all the kids and Nina was the Daughter. One weekend the nana past away because it was a really windy day and for same reason she fall off the mountain and past a way, when the girls new that happened they were so sad. Jane was building a time machine and when she was done Nina wanted to be the first one to test it but she needed to do something with it but she didn't so when she turned it on Nina turned into Mia and Mia turned into Nina they were so confused. Then in the morning Jane woke up and went to get Mia but she wasn't there Nina was she screams and Nina started to cry. Then Jane picked up Nina and went in the kitchen to feed the kids then when they were feed Jane took them to play on the field but suddenly a earthquake came an they were all so scared so they run to a old room and stayed there till the earthquake was done then they went to the park to play. When they were done they went back home. Jane puted Nina back in the time machine to put her back as normal and Mia back as a baby. Then when they were done they went back inside their house and went to sleep. When they woke up there nana Mele was sleeping in her bed. When they went in her room they saw nana Mele and they were so happy that she was back home.




The end.

To be continued.          


Keyhole Narrative writing plan

Tuesday, 23 October 2018

Mia Recount





Once upon a time, me and my family went to the beach. When I was swimming I saw a really pretty shell, and I ran to show my dad and then I put it on the sand and went to find more cool and pretty shells. Then when I had all of the shells I made my name with all of them and it made Mia Takiari and my dad helped me with it. When it was finished it looked really pretty because it was made with shells and I really like making staff with shell.
Last year me, my antys, my nana, my papa and my ucles, went to Gold Cost for my aunts wedding. When it was done me and my family went to Gold Cost and we went to wet n wild and movie world. When we all went to wet n wild we went on this twirling ride and we needed to hold on tight so we don’t full off. Then when we went to movie word me and my antys went on the Scooby-Doo ride when we went on it it was really dark and also really scary. Halfway in the ride we went ford then we went back really fast, I was Screaming because it was so fun and also really cool.    

Tuesday, 16 October 2018

Intro to Term 4 Writing - planning and writing doc.



Hello and welcome back to my blog. On Monday the 15th of October all the schools went back to school, When we went to school we had to watch some of the teachers movies, some teachers did a little show to do with art. Will we where watching the teachers do some art, Mr J and Mrs Nua where panting on Mr Burt he looked like Maui but he was actually meant to be Manaiakalani Man and he had a hock with the outfit it looked really cool.


Team 1 did a show and they were drawing and the drawing was a Lion it looked really cool and it looked like they were having so much fun.





Team 2 did a movie about them and there hobbies.





Team 3 did a painting consent and they only had 3 minutes. When they were done there panting looked really cool.





Team 4 did this painting thing and Mr Moran went up on the stage with some other teachers. When Mr Moran went up he needed to do some poses and the teachers needed to paint him and Mr Moran picked the winner who drawed the best pose of him and the winner was Mrs Sio.





Team 5 show was about them in art class with a new teacher and drawing a art photo with there feelings it was really funny and cool.






This is The End of The first day of school















Tuesday, 25 September 2018

Mia Designing a sport: Planning and writing doc


Write
Equipment:
What materials/things do you need for your sport?
You will need a  racket, a tennis ball
Setting:
Where can your game be played?
It can be played outside and inside
Players:
How many players are needed? How many teams are there?
4 v 4 2 groups
Competition/ Cooperation:
Explain how the players have to cooperate. Explain how the players compete.
Each player has to use they hands our they will be band by my game
Instructions:
Explain the rules of your game so that someone else could know how to play it.
Each player has to use they hands our they will be band by my game.
Objective/ Goal:
What is the goal of your game? How do players win?
They reach up to 27 points and if you do you get a platece choffes.  



WRITE a task description
Write a short paragraph telling your blog readers what the task was for this week.
  • What did you learn? (WALT) I lrent that you can make a sport with only a 7 sports guer.
  • What was the task? To get in to 3 and make a sport.
  • Did you enjoy this task? Yes because you can make a sport and a movie  
  • What did you find difficult? That you needed to think of a sport.

last week for writing we did this hope you enjoy.

Thursday, 20 September 2018

Designing a sport: Planning and writing doc

Equipment:

What materials/things do you need for your sport?
You will need a netball,  Rippa rugby belt and and a rippa rugby tags


Setting:
Where can your game be played?
It can be played on the field

Players:
How many players are needed? How many teams are there?
2 teams and 10 in each team

Competition/ Cooperation:
Explain how the players have to cooperate. Explain how the players compete.
Its Competition and Cooperation because you play a gest each other and you help the other team if you hurt team  

Instructions:
Explain the rules of your game so that someone else could know how to play it.
If you get tag or drop the netball or ford pause it you are out

Objective/ Goal:
What is the goal of your game? How do players win?

Get 27 try with the netball and if you get 27 try you win a middle

Thursday, 6 September 2018

Term 3 animation


Welcome to my animation. This year for our animation we are doing Move ya Body. My animation is about Cricket. The other team is going to wack the cricket ball and when she hits it it go's to places and places in tell the ball comes back to the cricket stadem and it hits the thing and the other girl wins and the 2 girls are happy that they played together and that is My Animation. Made by Mia.

Tuesday, 31 July 2018

Move ya body




On Monday Term 2 started. The first thing we did was the kariki and a song. Then we all stood up and Mr Burt, the Prefects and Mr Wiseman went up on the stage and he told all of us to stand up and follow Mr burt and Prefects and Mr Wiseman will they did jump jam. Mr Burt was dressed like a girl it was so funny and fun. On Monday Term 2 started. The first thing we did was the kariki and a song. Then we all stood up and Mr Burt, the Prefects and Mr Wiseman went up on the stage and he told all of us to stand up and follow Mr burt and Prefects and Mr Wiseman will they did jump jam. Mr Burt was dressed like a girl it was so funny and fun.

 1 movie was about keeping healthy and going to sleep early and doing some healthy staff that can keep your heart healthy before you go to sleep.


Team 2 movie was about eating healthy food and and keeping active and drinking lots of water.


Team 3 movie was about waking up early, playing with friends and eating healthy food.


Our movie team 4 was about moving your body, keeping fit and healthy and crating a new game.








Wednesday, 13 June 2018

Matariki Day Recount

On friday the 8th of june 2018 all of the students went out with other teachers. When Miss West and Mrs Moala told us were we were going I felt nervous because I wanted to go to sports or cooking. But inserted I went with Mr vogt. When we got there. There was not that much people there. After the roll Mr vogt told us what to do. There was some year 1s and year 8s in my group. My friend made a colorful poi. I made a black white and pink one. At a assembly Mr vogt asked me if i wanted to talk about our poi I was so nevosrs because the hall school was there so i did it and i was so scared because when I went on there everyone was staring at me.



  









Wednesday, 6 June 2018

Water bucket

On a windy day 11 animals went on a journey around NZ. The first place they went to was the sky tower.

They wanted to jump of it but the problem was they chould not jump off it because they are wild animals.

The man on the sky tower told them that he can try and put the belt on them and they were jumping around.

The man told them to stay still and they listened. They all had belts on them so the man told them on the count of 3 jump 1 2 3 jump.

The animals jumped and had butterflies in there stomach.

As soon as they touched the ground they took the belts off them and run to get a ice cream.

they finish there ice cream evere one was stirring at them they got scared and run to a forest. The bunnies seneffed the ground and walk.

They ended up in a lake the 4 bees were so happy and the 3 cow’s, 2 lama, the roster and the 2 bunnies was so happy that they found the lake.

They all swim in it and when they were done then bunnies seneffed the ground again and they told the rest of the animals to follow them and they ended up in a another lake but the lake was filled with people. So the bunnies seneffe the ground but the cows were mad and tired so they started to have a fart challenge. Then the bees got mad and tired of flying so they started to steg each other.

The bunnies were trying to find a place where they can rest. Then they ended up in this place.

It had a bed and food the animals were so happy and proud of the bunnies.

THE END
                          BY MIA



Thursday, 17 May 2018

FIA FIA night

On Thursday the 12 of April 2018, we had FIA FIA. If you don’t know what FIA FIA means it is like Polyfeast but instead you do it at school.

We needed to come back to school at 5:30 so we could get changed and get ready. At 7:00 we started.

Finally at last my group went on. My group was kapa haka. When we got on stage I heard My Dad and my Nana say, “Go Mia!” I was so nervous. When we started singing, everyone’s families were so happy and I saw some parents crying.

It was so cool.

When we finished singing the nice calm song, we did ‘Te iwi e’ and then we did the haka. The haka was Tektone. After that we went off the stage and went back to our changing room and got into our uniform because it was so cold and it was raining.

That was the end of our 2018 FIF FIA NIGHT.

I think I don't really want to do that again because I was so nervous  

Wednesday, 11 April 2018

about me



Kia Ora My name is Mia & I am a year 5 student. My teachers names are Miss West & Mrs Moala. I enjoy singing and I Like to play at the park with my friends. My favourite food is steak. I play touch & netball on the weekend I sometimes play Touch too. . Please leave me comment.