Once upon a time there stood an old shack. Inside the shack are bees, butterflies, spiders and lions. It is so rustic and dusty. The insects were fighting with the lions and broke the shack.
Your shack is such a busy place with so many insects. It must be hard to keep it tidy with a big lion making such a mess. How can you get the lion to be more polite and help the insects? Your picture is really beautiful Mia.
Well done Mia! your story sounds very intriguing. i Can't wait to hear about how the fight is resolved between the lion and the insects. I do hope the shack is rebuilt by both the lion and the insects. Your picture is very pretty too Mia Keep up the good work Mia
Your shack is such a busy place with so many insects. It must be hard to keep it tidy with a big lion making such a mess. How can you get the lion to be more polite and help the insects? Your picture is really beautiful Mia.
ReplyDeleteThis story paints a clear image with a good use of juicy words. An interesting collection of creatures in your rustic and dusty shack.
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Well done Mia! your story sounds very intriguing. i Can't wait to hear about how the fight is resolved between the lion and the insects. I do hope the shack is rebuilt by both the lion and the insects.
ReplyDeleteYour picture is very pretty too Mia
Keep up the good work Mia
Megan