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Monday 7 October 2019

Super Here Writing



Character 
Powers
Costume 
Mia- miss water breaker  
Animals and invisibility witch means he can change into any animal and he can also be invisibility.
There will be a button that says invisibility and a watch that can hear you and change u into an animal.
Mr Goodwin- Mr meltel breaker
Mental abilities and fire which means he can move stuff and have fire out his hands.
There will be another button that will say fire. Then there will be something else to have Mental abilities. 
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Problem Planning
Set up
Confrontation *
Rising Action
Crisis *
Resolution
We were all playing touch outside. When Mr Goodwin was really grumpy. So he took our ball.He was walking to the staff room. We were begging him to give our ball back but no.
Then he got storked by lighting
All of a sudden Mr Goodwin woke up and said out loud that his name was “Mr doctor metel breaker”.
Starts trying to kill Mia because hes turned crazy. 

Starts beating Mia up.
Finally, Mia tires him out by letting him punch heaps.
Then she turns into a gorilla and using invisibility beats Mr GOodwin up.
Lock him up into a volcano.


On Tuesday, me and my friends were playing outside. We were playing touch. Until Mr Goodwin came out, he stole our ball because he was REALLY grumpy. We ran after him and he went in the staff room, we were begging him to give our ball back. But no, he was just growling us because he was so mad and so grumpy. We made him a coffee and he still did not give our ball. Then all of a sudden Mia and  Mr Goodwin gets struck by lighting.

We both got knocked out!



As Mr Goodwin was waking up he was yelling out his name. He was yelling “my name is MR DOCTOR METEL.

Then Mia woke up from a terrible sleep, she suddenly realised she was now Miss Water Breaker.



Mr Goodwin really wants to kill Mia. He has gone really crazy. The light bulb has made him wanna fight Miss Water Breaker.

Mr Goodwin uses his fire to block out Mia. Mia uses her water to stop the fire but Mr Goodwin is too STRONG.


Mr doctor metal is destroying miss water breaker he is nearly gonna kill her. He is gone so CRAZY!


Finally, Mia tires him out by letting him punch Mia heaps of times. Then Mr Goodwin turns into being so tired. So Mia is punching Mr Goodwin he is getting a hiding. Mia turns into a rhino and runs after Mr Goodwin.


Then Mia turns into a massive eagle and picks him up and throws



Mr Goodwin is trapped in the volcano, the school is safe.


















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