Well done Mia. You have done a great job of putting the compound words together and thought about many things to pack if you were going away for the weekend. Next time think about using more colours and adding a little detail to your drawings. Remember, you can delete the instructions on each slide when you have finished to make the picture look better on your blog post. Mrs Belt Audio of this comment: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B86396VbohLfWkJvcUgyRmtwNE0
Hi Mia, what an awesome way to show your learning about compound words. You matched them up and used different colours to show the two parts of the word. This makes it very easy to read and understand. I also like how you talked about what you had drawn (for what you would take with you to stay somewhere for the weekend). This made it very clear and easy to understand what I was looking at! Thanks for sharing your learning. Miss Ashley, Tamaki Primary School.
Hi Mia, It looks like you have a lot of thing in your bag to take away for the weekend. I agree with Mrs Belt that some colour would have given your pictures more detail. Well done. Miss Davis
Well done Mia. You have done a great job of putting the compound words together and thought about many things to pack if you were going away for the weekend. Next time think about using more colours and adding a little detail to your drawings. Remember, you can delete the instructions on each slide when you have finished to make the picture look better on your blog post. Mrs Belt
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Mia I liked your explanation as to why the story was called Two Homes.
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Hi Mia, what an awesome way to show your learning about compound words. You matched them up and used different colours to show the two parts of the word. This makes it very easy to read and understand. I also like how you talked about what you had drawn (for what you would take with you to stay somewhere for the weekend). This made it very clear and easy to understand what I was looking at! Thanks for sharing your learning.
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Hi Mia, It looks like you have a lot of thing in your bag to take away for the weekend. I agree with Mrs Belt that some colour would have given your pictures more detail. Well done. Miss Davis
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